Saturday, February 04, 2006

Reviewing the Reviewer: David Williams on Symphony Pops Concert

I've been writing criticism for a long time. Back in my radio days, I would be asked to re-write commercials, punch-up political ads, and on occasion, re-write speeches. In 1992, with Melanie Larch, I started reviewing animated movies and TV shows for the Gazette. Since the mid-90s, I've been published in a variety of magazines writing on a number of pop culture topics. Not only have I written criticism, but I've also coached people on writing reviews. One question always comes to mind---"Who writes these reviews, and how come nobody reviews them?"

Maybe it's time we changed that. Here at PopCult, there's a "comments" link at the bottom of each post. If you read something you disagree with, feel free to leave a comment. You can call me names, or just say that I don't know what I'm talking about. I'm secure in my opinions. You can even rake me over the coals for writing this very item. I can take it. We critics can dish it out, but can all of us take it? Let's find out.

I have a unique opportunity to tackle this issue. Last Friday, I was privileged to be in attendance at the West Virginia Symphony Orchestra's Pops concert, "A Night On Broadway." This puts me in a position where I can pit my take on the concert against that of David Williams, whose review of the show ran in the Saturday Gazette-Mail. Since William's thoughts on the show didn't exactly jibe with mine, I thought it might be fun to run David's review through the same critical process that is normally used by reviewers.

I do have to confess to a glitch in my objectivity. My significant other, Melanie Larch, was a guest artist featured at the concert. While this may color my own opinion somewhat, it should be noted that Williams is a composer, and the Symphony has performed his work in the past -- so he's hardly an objective observer himself. We all have our built-in biases. The key is to inform your readers so that they can have a full picture. On to the review of the review:

Williams opens his piece with a rather clumsy paragraph that tries to explain the premise of the concert. He then wastes valuable space speculating about why the crowd was so large, without mentioning that dozens of legislators were visiting that evening. It's odd that he chose to begin his review this way. I would have saved the discussion of the crowd size for the end of the review. The size of the crowd doesn't really have that much to do with the quality of the performance. However, the point that the crowd was very large, and very enthusiastic, is worth noting. It's just not the most important point.

After that shaky beginning, when Williams begins critiquing the performers, we start to run into real problems. He seems to overlook the stunning performance by Eva Vidavska Kumar, so he can carp about some imagined microphone problem. He then pointlessly name-drops a person who had nothing to do with the concert, before briefly noting the incredible performance by Stephanie Adlington, and then dismissing her song as "worn out." A print review is not the place to offer "shout outs" to your old college buddies. (That's what the Internet is for.)

In the next paragraph, the reviewer praises the male singers, but takes what I think is an unnecessary pot shot at their ages. When you write a review, it's okay to say something nice about a performance without immediately qualifying it or adding a snarky remark.

Then, we get to the part where my objectivity goes out the window. Williams says that Melanie's song, "Everything's Coming Up Roses," "never quite took flight." He seems to base this remark on the fact that Mel interpreted the song, instead of coming out and performing as a caricature of Ethel Merman. Personally, I think William's comments were totally off-base, wrong-headed, and not grounded in reality. Mel received the second-largest crowd reaction of any adult soloist during the concert. She's worked 15 years towards the goal of performing solo with the Symphony, and I'm more than a little annoyed that Williams felt the need to be so dismissive of what the crowd obviously thought was one of the high points of the night. But then, I have a bit of a bias here.

Leaving that behind, we get to William's comments on two performances that I felt weren't exactly the high points of the concert. He says that putting an operatic vocalist on a song written for a pop singer was a "perfect fit." I thought it was a mismatch, and the singer would have been better served by a different tune, one more suited to her talents. He then goes on to describe the performance of "All That Jazz" as "comfortable." It was anything but comfortable. That song featured some of the only choreography of the evening, and it didn't really work that well for me. We can chalk this up to a difference of opinion.

Williams goes on to rightfully compliment Jon Cavendish and Joe Romagnoli, who both turned in wonderful performances. Almost as an afterthought, he mentions nine-year-old Alexandra Ayoob and sixteen-year-old Micah Atkinson, both of whom deserved far more than a one-sentence blow off. Had he not wasted so much space speculating on the size of the crowd, or interjecting irrelevant asides, perhaps Williams could have spent more time talking about these two dynamic young talents. Maybe he could have mentioned the standing ovations they received.

Wrapping up, Williams gives some love to the orchestra, praising their rendition of "A Century Of Song." The problem is, that 18-minute piece felt like it lasted a century. About halfway through, the dark of the audience looked like a starry night, as the twinkles of lighted wrist-watches started flickering like faraway celestial bodies. I felt that it would have been better had the orchestra skipped this medley, and devoted more time to the singers. It would have been nice if Bill Rainey or Mark Hornbaker could have had solo turns, or if the women could have had a group number. One has to wonder why a composer would go out of his way to praise the orchestra, even when they're performing a piece that didn't exactly thrill the audience.

As it is, I can't give Williams too high a grade on his review. I understand that the harsh, post-concert deadline makes it harder to organize your thoughts and build an essay the best way possible. But his analysis just seemed way off the mark to me and he didn't really present his thoughts in a cogent manner. Aside from his problems communicating his points, I felt like we didn't see the same concert. The concert I saw was an incredible event. The only parts I found slightly lacking were singled out for praise by Williams.

A review is supposed to be an opinion piece, but you have to be able to back up your opinions. His vague presentation and odd organization made for a sub-par bit of prose.

GRADE: I'd have to give this review a C-minus.

Thursday, February 02, 2006

A Culture-packed Weekend!

Hoo boy do we know how to cram a ton of fine culture all into the same weekend or what?

My Master's Voice

Friday and Saturday nights at the Clay Center, The West Virginia Symphony presents a pops program featuring nearly a dozen local talents performing Broadway hits. Among that group of folks is my "Animated Discussions" co-conspirator (and main squeeze) Melanie Larch. So now all you lucky people can rush out and hear the same lovely voice that I get to hear every time I ask Mel to sing back what we've written so far while working on a piece for the Gazz.

In addition to Mel, you'll get to hear homegrown talents Stephanie Adlington, Micah Atkinson, Alexandra Ayoob, Elisabeth Baer, Jonathon Cavendish, Mark Hornbaker, Bill Rainey, Joe Romagnoli, Evie Victorson and Eva Vidavska Kumar. They'll be tackling standards from the Great White Way, with tunes from South Pacific, Oklahoma, A Chorus Line and more. I'll be there Friday night. The show kicks off both nights at 8 p.m. Everybody ought to get out and support the symphony. If this goes over well, maybe they'll cast the next opera entirely with local singers.

A Rave For Old People

Saturday Night is also when the Friends of the Avampato Discovery Museum will be hosting the sixth annual Fidelio Party in the old Montgomery Ward space at the Charleston Town Center. Now, aside from the fact that scheduling a fund raiser for the Clay Center's museum on the same night as a concert at the Clay Center is not the swiftest move in the world, this is a fun way to raise money for a good cause. It'll be like a little taste of Mardi Gras right here in Charleston. And you don't have to wade through hurricane devastation to get to it!

The venue is intriguing. By holding the party in the mostly empty husk of an abandoned apartment store, Fidelio will have a unique industrial vibe. It'll be like a RAVE for grown-ups, only there'll be live music from Marci Stanely and The Ride Kings instead of droning electronica. And instead of Ectasy, there will be "legal beverages." Psychics, magicians and showgirls will mill about the partygoers. And they promise "exquisite desserts," which could be taken to mean almost anything. Admission is $55 at the door, unless you bought your tickets in advance, in which case you probably didn't bother to read this item. Proceeds go to the Avampato Museum.

The Big Event

All this culture and elegance is a build up to the big day -- SUPER BOWL SUNDAY! For the first time in 11 years, I will actually be watching the commercials AND the game. Melanie, who hates football, will be worn out from the concert, so I can just park myself in front the tube, and hope for a Steelers victory. But I will be at work. PopCulting while rooting on "The Bus." You see, the commercials that they run during the Super Bowl pretty much set the tone for the advertising that we see on TV for the rest of the year. On Monday, I'll give you my reaction to this year's crop of Super Bowl ads, and let you know which commercials you'll be sick of, and which ones you'll remember fondly.

The symphony, a benefit for a museum, and the Super Bowl, all in the space of three days! Just look at all the culture!

Wednesday, February 01, 2006

Art Blogging


This is a digitally obliterated photograph.

Occasionally, whilst digitally assaulting photographs, I get carried away, and the end result winds up looking so abstract that it's hard to tell exactly what it was in the first place.

This is one of those cases.

The title, which gives away the subject matter, is "Lee Street."

I'll post a less assaulted version next week. As it is, I liked the way this one turned out.

Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Dress Appropriately, It's A Holiday



Today is National Gorilla Suit day, as detailed by Mark Evanier here.

Take some time out from your busy day, put on a Gorilla suit, and remember the true meaning of the day, with those three wise travelers from the East, The Nairobi Trio.

Congress is even having a special joint session tonight to observe this special day.

Monday, January 30, 2006

Disney/Pixar Fallout & 2006 Animated Movies

Animated Discussions
by Rudy Panucci and Melanie Larch

Pixar Moves In

The Disney/Pixar merger went through in record time. The $7.4 billion-dollar deal sees Pixar's Steve Jobs taking a seat on the Disney board of directors, and John Lasseter adding creative executive duties for Disney Feature Animation to his title as the creative head of Pixar. He's also in charge of the "Imagineering" department for the Disney theme parks, which has fans of the parks rejoicing.

On Wednesday, Jan. 25, Lasseter's first day on the job, production on "Toy Story 3" was shut down. A sequel will not be made without the original production team from Pixar. Lasseter is said to have plans in store for the folks working on "Toy Story 3," so they won't be laid off, just reassigned.

A New Animation Glut

2006 is shaping up to be a banner year for animated feature films. According to some sources, as many as 15 major animated feature film releases are set for this year. That number includes the already-released "Hoodwinked", as well as a smattering of independent or foreign releases. The big-money major studio releases include:

Universal: "Curious George"
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20th Century Fox: "Ice Age 2: The Meltdown," and "Yankee Irving"
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Pixar: "Cars"
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Disney: "The Wild," and "Meet The Robinsons"
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Warner Brothers: "The Ant Bully," and "Happy Feet," the computer-animated tale of a dancing penguin, directed by George Miller of "Mad Max" fame.
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Dreamworks: "Over The Hedge" and "Flushed Away" (the latter made by Aardman Animation
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Columbia: Director Robert Zemeckis' "Monster House," done in the same creepy motion-capture manner as "Polar Express"

And that's leaving out lesser offerings from Paramount/Nickelodeon, The Weinstein Company, and Bill Plympton. Looks like a heavy year for fans of animation. True to the trendy nature of Hollywood, of the above-mentioned movies, only "Curious George" is traditionally-animated. "Flushed Away" is done in clay animation, while everything else on the list is all done with computers.